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yalah terlalu abrupt endingnya |
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diDiEaNA This user has been deleted
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selalu cite kat movie pun byk yg menginginkan pendengar.. pembaca & penonton buat prediction sendiri... ingin kan mereka untuk berfikir...
ahakz... |
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ini kisah cinta tahap2 filem uwei ni... |
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diDiEaNA This user has been deleted
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ahakz... kua kua kua.. pandai la ko jinakji... |
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mel_hikaru This user has been deleted
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hohoho...tergezut wa kejap...tetibe jerr dah abes
tp ok gak ending cam tu...ala2 drama,movie gitu..
nasib baik happy ending...bebaloi gak wa ikut dr awal... |
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diDiEaNA This user has been deleted
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Originally posted by mel_hikaru at 25-10-2004 19:39:
hohoho...tergezut wa kejap...tetibe jerr dah abes
tp ok gak ending cam tu...ala2 drama,movie gitu..
nasib baik happy ending...bebaloi gak wa ikut dr awal...
tengkiu... Im not perfect not a writer neither an editor... jus drop few words sbg penyeri Bod writer ni je..:bgrin:
[ Last edited by diDiEaNA on 27-10-2004 at 07:44 AM ] |
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sambung ler lagi, nak tahu gak ape si Camelia tu ckp....
buat ler cite Masih Adakah Cinta part II...
pastu, part III lak....
hehe |
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hmm..rasa cam pendek sangat citer ni. tak puas nak baca. tapi cerita ni tak ceritakan kedudukan masa dan tempat sesuatu scene tu. terus je lompat2. so cam tak paham sket. |
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diDiEaNA This user has been deleted
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Originally posted by Bobpley at 28-10-2004 00:52:
sambung ler lagi, nak tahu gak ape si Camelia tu ckp....
buat ler cite Masih Adakah Cinta part II...
pastu, part III lak....
hehe
tgk la camne.. kalau ade sumber-sumber ilham...insyaallah akan dipertimbangkan... |
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diDiEaNA This user has been deleted
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Originally posted by sweetgal at 28-10-2004 03:51:
hmm..rasa cam pendek sangat citer ni. tak puas nak baca. tapi cerita ni tak ceritakan kedudukan masa dan tempat sesuatu scene tu. terus je lompat2. so cam tak paham sket.
pendek  ko kate gal??? punye jenuh aku nak abihkan...neway gud komen next time insyaallah akan ade improvement |
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diDiEaNA This user has been deleted
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dears...
neway thanx 4 all comments from korang...insyaallah ia akan lebih baik dlm masa akan datang... ;) |
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Undead_2 This user has been deleted
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laaa...dah abih rupanya... |
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diDiEaNA This user has been deleted
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satu lagi cerpen yg patut diselamatkan utk aku mengcopynyer...:bgrin: |
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habis juga citer ni aku baca
marathon ni..dr awal smpai ending |
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thanks kpd penulis..
lepas ni buat citer baru pla |
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Category: Belia & Informasi
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Post time 25-10-2004 02:53 PM
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