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SHORT STORY: Waiting in KL

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Post time 28-1-2009 02:12 PM | Show all posts |Read mode
Dex sat quietly on the park bench overlooking Bandaraya station. Waiting and waiting for something to come. Any news of his friends. How agonising the wait has been..

Two weeks in KL. With no one but himself. Hoping against hope that he would return to them.

The sky is blue. The sun is shining. But it means nothing without them. Dex mused silently.

TO BE CONTINUED..

[ Last edited by  LLM at 28-1-2009 10:22 PM ]
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 Author| Post time 28-1-2009 10:21 PM | Show all posts
Half an hour later Dex walked through the Bukit Nanas reserve forest trail..His mind wandering to south of the causeway..

He took pictures of the trees and stuff. Trying very hard to be upbeat.

'This city has too many ghosts that haunts me' he thought to himself silently. 'Echoes of the past. Time to lay them all to rest'

Dex walked back to his place come sunset.

TO BE CONTINUED
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Post time 30-1-2009 09:01 AM | Show all posts
Sambung a agi!
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 Author| Post time 2-2-2009 05:01 PM | Show all posts
When he reached home, he sat on his apartment balcony. He looked down, stepped on the ledge, and jumped off from his 32nd floor apartment.

He died immediately.. His brains splattered all over the streets of KL..

THE END

Aku dah hilang modal. last last aku tamatkan cite ni serta merta
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Post time 4-2-2009 07:53 AM | Show all posts
Hahaha...senang je kan!
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Post time 4-2-2009 07:57 AM | Show all posts

Balas #4 LLM\ catat

ko dah tak de idea ke... tak de kerja?.... saje tu

citer baru lak....
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Post time 5-2-2009 12:11 PM | Show all posts

Balas #4 LLM\ catat

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