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Author: Encik_Rocky

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Post time 8-12-2015 12:20 AM | Show all posts
mana tt ni... aku dok menunggu dah lama ni...
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Post time 8-12-2015 07:47 AM | Show all posts
Encik_Rocky replied at 23-11-2015 08:59 PM
Sambungan

Bunyi deringan Whatsapp bersiul di telefon aku.

" Bongok! Kau tu baru putus tunang, aku risau la kot-kot aku buang tebiat pergi terjun kat laut Osaka Port ke ape."


Rai patutnya cakap "kau".

citer yang menarik. watak utama alim2 kucing...


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Post time 8-12-2015 07:56 AM | Show all posts
Esmiria replied at 5-12-2015 03:32 AM
npa aku rsa si’aku’ ni berpontensi nk jdi penzina atau perogol je

dik Es silap tu....itulah namanya soft porn.

nampak tak nampak je adegannya. itulah yang seksinya. penulis tak ceritakan selebihnya....membiarkan pembaca bermain dengan akal sendiri...apa2 yang bermain di fikiran pembaca. Btw, bukan ke watak yg sebegini Es suka? watak yang bukan perfect baik..or 100% jahat?

tak gitu TT?
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Post time 8-12-2015 08:55 AM | Show all posts
kambeng_masam replied at 8-12-2015 07:56 AM
dik Es silap tu....itulah namanya soft porn.

nampak tak nampak je adegannya. itulah yang  ...

Ye.sy suka watak cmni.pe sy pk soft porn tu just adegan kiss je oo cm ni pun ada.kena google wiki soft porn ni.



Bermkna,cite tt ni buat sy pk cmtu.hahahaha.

tkpe,sy dah  nak masuk  ke series kedua.



tpi...hmm..still x elok...hmm
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Post time 8-12-2015 09:28 AM | Show all posts
Esmiria replied at 8-12-2015 03:55 AM
Ye.sy suka watak cmni.pe sy pk soft porn tu just adegan kiss je oo cm ni pun ada.kena google wiki  ...

Es bermain dengan akal & perasaan je tu....heheh.
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Post time 19-12-2015 11:37 AM | Show all posts
Nice...sila sambung
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Post time 21-12-2015 03:57 PM | Show all posts
lama betul menunggu ni
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